Nothing but a Whisper

gone...

   just...

      gone...

your light dark

  leaving me without our spark

      just your permanent mark  

could've saved you from your fall  

   but you had already given your all 

watched the world spin through the pain

    all i could see was the rain

or maybe it was my tears

   knew i was consumed by my fears

    thought we had more years

but now you're gone 

   and alone i watch the dawn 

     name called but still withdrawn 

 

  

  

 

 

 

This poem is about: 
Me

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