Notice me

Thu, 04/14/2016 - 15:25 -- kenii99

I notice you everywhere but you don't notice me. I stay in the shadows knowing that I won't be able to do anything. To talk or to be with you is all I desire. I'm just someone that you don't even notice when I'm around. I die wanting to talk to you. I die trying to be with you but I can't do anything. I'm just someone you don't notice. It took me a lot to say hi but like I said I'm just someone you don't know, just anther random person that you don't notice. I wish you would notice me but again I remain away from you knowing I can't be notice.

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