Oh Sweet Water You Were My Trick

With her eyes closed 

she jumped

hitting the cool lake water

opening her eyes under water

she could see all the magical life it had to offer

rising to the surface she looked back off the rock she had jumped from

seeing her stalker standing there 

she forced herself to swim accross the lake 

to get away 

the trees welcomed her with there branches wide

she ran oh she ran far

she looked back and he was behind her waiting.

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