Once Upon a Time

Thu, 08/14/2014 - 14:25 -- reyy134

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80504
United States
40° 9' 26.1252" N, 105° 0' 32.3604" W
80504
United States
40° 9' 26.1252" N, 105° 0' 32.3604" W

Sounding so perfect

my "once upon a time"

this journey began

as a perfect rhyme

 

You drew on my emotions

like honey for a bee

how faultless my trust

oh, how wrong I was soon to see

 

I gave you my heart

I wore it on my sleeve

your charm and allure

is what deceived me to believe

 

I conversed my concern

yet you threw deception in my face

your promises built on libel

slithered out in such haste

 

Then caught in a lie

a liar you became

in the end I hope it was worth it

my trust- what was once us- will never be

 
 

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