The one who walked in the same path as me

Fri, 01/31/2014 - 00:06 -- Joshy

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To think that you would fall from the skies

above onto the path i was chosen to walk. 

That you'd make me hope that i could be 

what i so longed to be.

And make me believe i actually had a chance to have

Your Smile.

Your Laugh

And your eyes directed on me.

To hope you would give me a chance

to love and be loved.

 

Your the falling star that i so desperately

tried to catch in the palms of my hands.

That star i looked up to every night wishing to one day hold.

 

And now that i have you i don't know what to do.

But one thing i do know is that now

i have that beautiful smile,

Your mysterious eyes,

and your heart warming laugh

all to myself. I'm truly blessed

to have been lucky to have had

you fall from the skies above onto the path I

was chosen to walk.

 

Comments

mely13

This is awesome! Very good!

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