The other me

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Among the crowd i walked

but yet i feel alone

My world stand still

as the clock ticks 

My direction. purpose.

all seen to be of enormity

What is life when the world 

that i have know is crashing down

The heavy weight 

everyday struggle

cast a drak shawod 

An incomplete life 

that i have nither a desire nor a will to live

A life on consent battle between good and evil

So tell me what is life

when one feel helpless and trap

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