Pain and sorrow

No one knows what it is to feel hurt. To know that someone you loved let you go. I love this person so much i would never let them go. Pass by thinking of every moment hurts and sometimes i just want to feel. When i pass by i wonder do you ever feel my pain, can u see the love in my eyes, can you feel the dust in the air when i pass by or is it just you can hide under a rock the rest of your life. Butt me is something so different when you pass by i can see the love in your eyes, i can feel pain, i can feel like the world never stop but since the time of us ended. I feel like my whole world as change. But good things the only problems is the flower will never grow without you.

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