Pie Please!

I'd like some pie please...

What?... GIVE ME PIE OR YOU DIE!

All I want is pie.

Sir I understand

pie is in such high demand

Sorry to be rude,

But dude, I can't wait

Anymore for just one slice

 

I'm in love with pie!

I like blueberry;

My favorite is Cherry;

I like strawberry,

Apple, raspberry,

Apricot, and lemon pie

 

I JUST NEED ONE SLICE!

I'll pay a price for

The last pie before I die...

Pie! THANK YOU... Sucker!  

 

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Comments

non.poet123

This is really good, it's also really funny. I feel like you could make this into a limerick.

tacoman37

Thank you. It means a lot to hear from someone who's read my poem. This was the first poem I submitted on this site, and it's cool to hear what others think. I agree, I could make this into a limerick. I was just thinking of doing a limerick for my next poem. Thank you again for the feedback, and tell others if you'd like to read my poems as well and comment on them. I'd love to get more feedback on my poetry.

sillyjello

It's hilarious. I had a good laugh. Great poem by the way.