placement.

i placed the idea of love onto a five foot seven boy

with pale skin and sea green eyes

how daring it is to take the emotion

seven billion people yearn for, fall to their

knees for and

reflect it onto a green eyed boy,

yet i did anyways.

 

Comments

Brian Joe Pennington

this is really good avery.riane i like a lot its happened to me even though i don't have green eyes.blue is close enough

avery.riane

thank you !! and its actually inspired by rupi kaur i believe she said something like this in the sun and her flowers but yeah just a lil something abt my boyfriend !! 

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