Planets of Pretend

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Your enchanting eyes enrapture me
Fracture my heart and capture me
Eyes as cool as ice evidently entice
Suffice my avidity for actual advice
 
Your sweetly shy smile seduces me
Reduces the reserved recluse in me
Grins from within willingly begin
Transcend past peerless planets of pretend
 
Avid affection arises in me
Disguises the senseless surprises from me
A soul that consoles and conducts no control
Enrolls in a heart I hope that I stole

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