Pretty Please Comment

Let me know I am heard

I am a slut for reviews

That aren't just in my head

 

I need someone who tells

Where they think the story goes

Leaving lasting spells

So that at least I know

 

I just want attention

Im not scared to admit it

But I refuse to mention

Why I wrote what I writ

 

I want to pour my heart out

To a desperate internet junkie

Because I cannot shout

 To some guidance counselor flunkie

 

Is there anyone to talk to

Or are we just screaming at a wall

As we all stare at a blank space

ans slowly start to fall