Relief of Pain

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Stress? What is stress?

Stress is pain, more like a bad condition that's created from hurt,torture, and the misunderstanding from peers.

They think you're just a typical teenager with typical teenage problems,but they have no clue on what's going on with you

You're in a lonesome world of your're own searching for Happiness

Searching for Happiness & comfort in a world full of confusion, where everything is in black and white, where the sun doesn't shine, where the birds don't fill the streets with the sweet peaceful tone of chirps...

Sometimes you wonder if you can find a relief of pain on the edge of a boat in the middle of the ocean, where you somehow lose your're feet....

Lose your're feet from up under you, SPLASH!

Into the deep ocean of relief...

You're Loved ones are extending their hands as you're going under trying to save you but you don't extend your're hand for the return, instead you smile. Smile?

Instead you Smile and say "No more pain."

 

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