Remedy for the Lonesome

Tue, 04/16/2013 - 18:34 -- savshad

Come down to the river
Come watch with me
See the ripples and the flow
Of the water as it goes
As what goes?
Your mind
Set it free. Find peace
Peace where?
Out there, on the rocks;
Sit and watch

See the ripples and the flow
Of the water as it goes
Seek occasional isolation
From the people all around
Make no association
Between thoughts and mouth
Listen only
Do you still feel lonely?

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