Renaissance et Réminiscence

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As i stared out into the ocean,

my feet covered by the sand,

my rope-twisted hair danced gently in the breeze.

Then I remembered how this beautiful expanse of royal blue and green

had been....

 

It had been destructive, forceful and even so still beckoning,

like a girl beckoning a boy into her arms,

like the devil trying to trap innocent souls....

but i still went to it.

 

I felt myself wrapped in it's powerful snare,

found myself being drawn into a dangerously compelling embrace.....

 

I woke up suddenly to find myself being ppulled back to reality,

a comforting breeze passed through my soul,

freezing my mind, my spirit

and lifting a weight off my shoulders.

 

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