Retrospect

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Dreaming in the twilight,

Watching the sun fall into night,

Looking out from Grandmother Window.

 

Lacy curtains hung with care;

See the moon, reflecting there.

 

Gazing up into the meteor shower,

My home was like a charcoal tower.

One of fire,

One I saw clearer,

Reflected in the rear-view mirror.

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