Revenge

Thu, 12/12/2013 - 19:13 -- xo_nick

The power of revenge can overwhelm ones heart....

it can fill you with rage and hatred and tear you apart...

sometimes revenge is like cold water on the hottest summer day...

sometimes revenge is like a foul stinch that will turn everybody away....

am i wrong for wanting revenge so much, or is it right because of what

we are raised to believe....

they say treat others as you want to be treated, so if you make me bleed,

i make you bleed...

if you take from me, i take from you...

if you offend me, i will offend you...

revenge is a beast you have to learn to control...

you might take it to far even if its the end of the road....

i would like to leave off with a question...

and i want your honest opinion....

should revenge be obtained???

or should you just end it.....

 

 

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