A ripple

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Your like a ripple in the water-
Jou just brush agents my feet before fading away
Your scared to welcome it in lurk you use to-
You were hurt to much in to short a time
You've gone mad in grief
Devastation is where love use to be
Fear is where trust should be
You made yourself in someone else
Now they've up and left
Your a shell of your formerself
And now a ripple in the water just badly brushing agents my feet

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