Ruins My Whole Flow

Ruins My Whole Flow

 

The sun came up.

Waking up is hard enough,

Without your love.

 

I stretch and yawn.

Go and get the paper,

On my lawn.

 

And you drive by, in your red car,

With the girl you found at the closest bar,

And I,

I just miss you so!

Living without you,

Ruins my whole flow.

 

I shake and cry.

You fly right by,

I sigh…

And for her another ring you,

Buy!

Buy!

Buy!

 

And you drive by, in your red car,

With the girl you found at the closest bar,

And I,

I just miss you so!

Living without you,

Ruins my whole flow.

 

I cry, you fly right by.

I sigh, and for her another ring you,

Buy!

Buy!

Buy!

 
 
 
Disclaimer: Written many years ago...

Comments

shortfemale3

This poet has what it takes to be a writer for country music .She is positively down home real
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