Sad words after a bowl of cereal

My tears are like oranges.  If oranges wer the same shape and color as tears. Which ther not. Tears ent got colour.  Now yur gone. Like that film. Gone with the wind. I havnt seen it. I misses you. Like a missing child Except i know for certain yur still alive. My love for you is like.... love That's it really

 

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S.zaynab.k

Except for the mod style text language I feel this is well written and a super poem expressing swell. Thumbs up!

 

plz pleez do drop by to read and comment under my newest poem too.  Such thoughts interaction via comments feel warm in this cold world so we can be all be friends.

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