"Second Fig"

 

 

Safe upon the solid Rock, their ugly houses stand;

Come and see my shining palace built upon the sand.

-- Edna St. Vincent Millay

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Joel_Heinze

She was very tallented; however, read my response to her poem and you will see what she was lacking.

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