She's Torment - The Villanelle Of The Cat

  

She couldn't stop thinking about the cat
It was just so freaky and strange
But she could never forget the rat

That morning, She was shocked by the combat
She had found herself shaking downrange
She couldn't stop thinking about the cat

Later, She was spooked by a habitat
She tried to focus on an exchange
But she could never forget the rat

He said, the cat wasn't that pat
Said her mind had become too long-range
She couldn't stop thinking about the cat

She decided to do something flat
The cat was like a toxic interchange
But she could never forget the rat

She's demise was fat
Her mind turned into a range
She couldn't stop thinking about the cat
But she could never forget the rat

Comments

catie_kitty123

this is a villanelle i wrote its not that good at all but its a start

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