A Short Poem

Life is complicated...To say the least....

It tests our vulnerabilities...

Leads us on diverging paths....

And teaches us along the way.

 

What is most important is...

It never ceases to surprise us...

With spontanteity....

and unexpected turn of events....

 

-Ramanpreet Kaur

Comments

S.zaynab.k

Yes true, great poem about life. Thumbs up.

 

 . pls do review my latest poem too, I'm quite new here but have been writing elsewhere for ages and readers say they get messages for life from my poems. So pls add your thoughts under it.

upnorthdavid

So much packed into a small space, great job!

upnorthdavid

Check out a poem I posted called My Life Is Changing

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