Short Rap to my mind

Fri, 12/12/2014 - 18:30 -- Soulae
My mental,my mental/I see how you work/You open your eyes and then you observe/You look at somebody and see all their flaws/You pick em all out and then they dissolve/Dissolve, dissolve/Because your so perfect/You wanna fix everything wrong on the surface/But your only human and their human too/So what the fxck you gonna do? Repeat 4x
 
Stop pointing/Thinking/you know everything about someone/When you don't/don't know what's in their heart/don't know what's in their soul/You don't know.../So/stop putting psychological thoughts in ya head/like you studied this persons life and know everything/Cause you didn't/Cause you don't know...the difference/Just look at yourself in the mirror/I promise you it would be so clearer/It would be so different/You'd be looking at yourself/Like that's me/I'm talking about me, behind the skin that you wrote your wrongs from deep within/So kill that hypocritical....nonsense.

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