Silence

There’s something beautiful about nothing,

That emptiness on the wall,

The spaces in between,

The black spots in my dreams,

The words I’ll never say,

The places I only pass by on my way.

 

 

Comments

powerful.imani

Yes this poem is so true . Because sometimes i like to seat in silence and let my surroundings do the talking for me . This message was so calming and relaxed my minds . Very good message love this poem . Keep up the good work 

check out my poetry and hopefully it inspire you and others 

keep up the good work 

Chelsea Jeannette

Thank you! I'm certainly glad it gave such a reaction.  I will definitely check out your poetry. Thanks again, it means alot to have feedback.

Angelwith1wing

Beautiful!!! You are an amazing poet. I wish I could make a poem so beautiful and powerful in just a few lines. Love the poem. God bless you and keep writing on my friend!!!

Chelsea Jeannette

Thank you!  I'm really flattered, but you could definitely make a poem powerful in just a few lines. I just took a strong notion and described it in 5, 6 different ways.  Anyway, I'm glad you loved it. And I shall keep writing!  ;)

 

 

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