Silly Child, I Can Swim

You thought you could drown me

You though you could kill me

You thought I would leave you alone

Silly Child, didn't you know

I am you and you are me

We are one together

You will never be free

I can give you a few moments if you'd like

To breathe, have a moments peace

But I'll be back

I'll always be back

You can never be rid of me

For I am you and you are me

And we are one together, forever

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Well expressed! Nicely expressed! 

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

every day you'll face spiritual battle

put all your faith in God

be true to yourself no matter what

great poem 

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