Smiling Sand

Waves like emotion pound the surf

Relentlessly shaping, molding, forcing, scolding.

The sand needs to conform.

 

Waves like emotion pound the surf

Taking pieces of the beach with it.

The waves grab disappointment off the beach

Swallows it whole.

Pushes it to its depths.

The ocean doesn’t feel.

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