So quickly you left me.

So quickly you left me, I don't understand why.

Had I done something so wrong to be punished, or was it just time?

You loved me all 16 years with such a big heart.

I just couldn't grasp why we were torn apart.

So quickly you left me, in the blink of an eye.

Daddy, should I blame you or that bottle of poison for our unspoken goobye?

 

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