Sober

Wed, 08/21/2013 - 14:00 -- JTD827

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Living off the alcohol
Under my breath
Surrounded by this wall
That has kept me
In this hell
The whiskey has changed
How I live
Shot after shot
Just takes another bullet
Out of me
Wish away
For one day
When this is over
I just want to be sober
Killing myself in liquor
Every time it goes
Down my throat
It just feels quicker
Break away
From this forever
Wish it away
For just one day
This wall
I need to get over
So I can forever be
Sober.

 

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JTD827

To help Alcoholics who are troubled by the poison of Alcohol.

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