SODIUM EFFECT

 

It's a very black night,

Just with no light,

Living with mosquitos,

Sinking in cold water,

Wondering for my future,

But seeing it my book,

With a help of my pen.

 

Summing all my efforts,

Seeking for success,

Sincerely ending up to zero,

Suddenly my hope flied.

Losing every moment,

Just as Sodium do,

But due to the stability it gets,

My hope was build up.

 

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