The Spirit of a Woman

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62221
United States
38° 30' 59.3244" N, 89° 53' 50.2152" W

I wish that you could see the world from her point of view
It's a beautiful magical ancient place but yet it feels brand new.
On her window there's a musical pitter patter sound
The smell of the rain excites her, she doesn't let it get her down
When the sun shines, she smiles illuminating the world
Skipping running jumping just like a little girl.
Childhood as so very long ago has departed and gone
But you'd never know since her eyes are brighter than the dawn.
She has a way about her that's whimsical, gliding freely through her life
No one could ever hold her down, she could never be a wife.
To her all life is precious, no matter how small
She'd even save a spider crawling on the wall
Her advice is to make every moment last
She knows best that it all goes by too fast.

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

this person's spirit will live on

this is an nice poem

very spiritually beautiful

keep writing

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