Sweet Love, I Care Thee

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They said go,

But I always said 'No'.

'Cause I-L-Y, til the day I die,

You make me smile when

I want to cry.

 

You words of sweet love

Hit me like moms apple pie,

I don't know why

but I swear I would cry

if you were to die.

 

They tell me it's wrong,

but my feeling too strong.

Thats why I say 'No'

when they tell me to go..

 

But if I do cry,

you better had died.

When your heart

stops beating,

I should see a flatline.

 

I love you that bad,

carnivals,

kisses,

love,

and sad

 

Movies..hoping,

wishing,

praying to God

that my heart

will soon be thawed.

 

That's why I say 'No'

when they tell me to go..

 

But where do you stand?

Will you give me

your hand,

or will you say 'No'

because they told you to

Go.

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