tick tock

i love you with

my whole soul but sometimes you

make me feel like a bear in a

trap

 

and i care for you with

every inch of my heart but sometimes i

feel like i might be 

sinking

 

i want to spend every

moment with you but sometimes i feel we

are a ticking clock

 

tick tock

tick tock

Comments

Corrie Pearson

Good poem I really like it, thanks for sharing!

 

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