Trouble with "maybe"

Wed, 05/17/2017 - 05:51 -- Neftee

Are you ok?
"Sure"
Oh... ok.
I said "sure", since when does that mean "no"?
Baby, "sure" is the rape child of "yes" and "No"
I don't know if you'll be ok, but I gotta know,
Will you promise me you'll try?
She said "trying is the first step to dying".
So I told I was dying before I met you.
Now I'm frozen in time

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