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89511
United States
39° 22' 51.2508" N, 119° 55' 40.062" W
89511
United States
39° 22' 51.2508" N, 119° 55' 40.062" W

I took the wrong turn
Lost on the way to words
Now I'm running in a circle
Can't seem to get off track
3rd lap, 4th lap, 5th lap
Metaphors all recycled and reused and reduced
My poetry's a plastic cup
SOLO
BOGO
HOBO
NO HOME
Attracted to myself
Narcissistic homo
Green trees
Blue jeans
James Dean
Sitting in a van with a man
His hands on a wheel. A circle.
I'm back to a circle
Stuck on the track
Road block in my arteries
No creative flow to the heart of me
Pardon me.
You're beautiful. I'm weird.
Awkward apology.
Sun moon ocean stars.
Reverse humanization
I make the women the thing
Instead of making the wind sing
Text book objectification.
No justification.
Simple deprivation.
Propitiation.
Gospel.
End.

Comments

Abbylevy

Sigh...this really stirrred up my emotions...Really good! keep it up!

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