Visions of Greatness

Wed, 08/26/2015 - 21:11 -- jwade12

I envy the rising sun,

not because of its gross incandescence

or from its calming warmth,

but because it ascends.

 

I envy the rising sun,

and while I trudge through life's obstacles,

the sun rises to the challenge,

and lights the world with brillience.

 

I envy the rising sun,

because I love to improve, 

and I strive to achieve greatness.

I want to change the world.

This poem is about: 
Me

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