war

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when i saw your body for the first time, i realized how war had torn you apart.

how many battes you had lost

         on youre wrist

         on youre thighs

how any fights accurred

        on youre stomach

       on your sides

          oh youre lovely sides

And how many times i told you i loved you

because i do

You have lost so many battles

please dont lose the war too

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