"What On Earth Is This !?!" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 14/9/2005

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United Kingdom

What On Earth Is THIS ... ???
SHOOTINGS Now In ... " Harvey Nic's " ... !?!

Students POLICING Campuses ... ???

DOCTORS Who Are Now HEALTH RISKS ... !!!!!!!!!!!

This Country Should Perhaps ENLIST ...
Those Who Won Those OLD Ashes ... !!!

That's A JOKE But Things Are BROKE ... !!!
Things Now CLEARLY NEED A Fix ... !!!

Where Is ... " Jim " ...
Could He Do It ... ?!?!?

STOP This FLOOD of NEW RACISTS ...
STOP These Days of WICKEDNESS ... !!!!!!!!!!!

I'm NOT Sure Who Could DO This ... ?!?

How About Me Through POETRY ..... ???

I'm NOT Sure Let's Wait and See ...
Who Will OPEN Doors For Me ... ???
To Poetically Speak On Your TV ...
Or ... " Radio 4 " ...

"Isn't that Big V ?
His dulcet tones really soothe me !"

It's NOT Arrogance ... !!!
It's Just ... " My Dream " ...

Like FINDING Those Who Are UNCLEAN ... !!!
CORRUPTING Yes Whilst Building Teams ...
Just Like IN Some Star Wars Scenes ...

EMPERORS Who Employ Crews ...
Crews of FOOLS Who DID NOT Use ...

Their BRAINS BEFORE USING Gun Tools ... !!!
CLEARLY They Had MISSED The News ...

THE FORCE Is STONG In Those Who Choose ...
A Life WITHOUT DESTRUCTIVE Tools ... !!!

DON'T Rush In DON'T Be A Fool ... !!!
Cos' You May Drown In Your NEW POOL ... !!!!!

See Life Is HARD If You're NOT SMART ... !!!!
And Will STILL BE Even If You ARE ... !!!!!!

Don't Let Your Head CONTROL Your Heart ... !!!
Try To FINISH What You START ...

Otherwise .....................
Things Fall ... A P A R T ... !!!

Just Like MARRIAGE ... !!!
REMEMBER Your Baggage Can Cause You DAMAGE ... !!!!!!!!!!

These Are Times of TERRIBLE Crimes ...
I'm Wondering WHEN We'll See THE SIGNS ... ?!?
And Make A CHANGE Before ... " Resigned " ...
To Seeing The END of ALL Mankind ... !!!

I Think It's Time I Pressed ... REWIND ...
Just For Those Who REMAIN Blind ...

SHOOTINGS Now IN ... " HARVEY Nic's " ... ?!!!?

So Much For Those ... " Shopping Trips " ... !!!!!!

Come On Folks WHAT ON EARTH IS THIS ?!?
Murders of Young TEENAGE Kids ... ?!?

WAKE UP NOW RAISE Your EYELIDS ... !!!!!!

We NEED To STOP This Use of GUNS ...
Guns Just KILL Our Mothers' Sons ... !!!
Or Their Daughters Lambs To The SLAUGHTER ... !!!

Giving People Fits of ... TRAUMA ... !!!!!

Why Give THAT I'd Rather Give LOVE ...
And Give My Mother One LAST HUG ... !!!!!!!!!!!!

See That's The STUFF That DEFINES LOVE ... !!!

LOVE From A Mother To Her SON ... !!!
It Seems We're Breeding ... ALIENS ... !!!

WHY KILL ... " Humans " ...
WHY Use ...... " Guns " ....... !?!

I Can't See How This is FUN ... ?!?

But Here's THE DEAL Don't Ever Feel ...
I'll LET Someone Take My Last Meal ... !!!!!!

How About YOU What Would You Do ... ?

I'd Really Like To Hear Your Views ... !!!

Would You KILL For Someone's SHOES ... ?!?

Some Now DO And That's The TRUTH ... !!!
Check The Web If You Want PROOF ... !!!

PROOF of Youth Who Are UNCOUTH .... !!!

PROOF That Some NOW Hit The Roof ... !!!
And Then Do Things They Should NOT Do ... !!!

Like Taking LIFE In ... " Harvey Nic's " ...
Have You Got The Point of THIS ... ?

NO Performance Tricks Just STRAIGHT Lyrics ...
NO Glass House Mine's Made of BRICKS ... !!!

Things Right NOW NEED ... " One BIG FIX " ... !!!!!!!!!!!

My Name's NOT Jim ...
PLEASE Call Me ... " Virge " ...
I .... INSIST ... !!!!!

I'll End This Piece As I Began ...

PEOPLE ... !!!!!!

..... " What On Earth Is This ?!? " ....

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