What i would change

Tue, 02/25/2014 - 10:47 -- Hlayton

What would I change to see this world better?

What do i believe is best for those around us?

what could make a diffrence and help my friends and family?

Changing our ability with how act towards others.

The way we treat those who we do not know

Change the fact that we see people as lower or higher class

Change the way we see others who are not like us.

 

Seeing fights around me over the ways we act

Judging on how people dress or look all around.

Always causing struggle and hatred 

over ideals that we have that seem to never become true.

 

Wishing that the pain that has been caused can be over rided 

and can be made stronger for those around us.

Maybe things wont change but in the end it will always become 

something to fight for in the end.

It may not be something that will change now

but eventually it will and everything will become peacful 

well atleaa\st in a dream i have.

 

 

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