What Makes Me

His smile is what keeps me going

His smile makes me smile back

 

His laugh is what makes my day

His laugh is what the sound of happiness is

 

His eyes are what I look at most

His eyes make me fall in love more

 

He that treats me well

He that is so commited and so am I

 

He that is so romantc

He that is so amazing than I

 

He that completes me in eveyway

He that means more to me than I mean to him

 

The guy I lay in bed thinking about at night

The guy I lay in bed and think how madly in love I am

The guy I am madly in love with forever

The guy I can't let slip away fom me

 

The handsme guy I don't want to ever lose

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angiemartin

its about some one who is amazing is my everything

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