What went wrong?

See I don't know what went all wrong

i don't know if I did wrong?

you confuse me with the cherry

i thought I was a strawberry

but I don't know what went all wrong?

you chose to stay young

and keep doing drugs,

i wanted the best for you

but your still to young.

Age don't matter

but I guess mental age does, 

your still older but act like young.

what went wrong?

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