Whisper of Strength

Locations

1121 Sunview Ct
23454
United States
36° 46' 47.802" N, 75° 59' 45.2328" W
1121 Sunview Ct
23454
United States
36° 46' 47.802" N, 75° 59' 45.2328" W

Thumbs up, no fear, smile and no tears

Love expressed,

My mother’s hands and her embrace

Stability is near.

And still the whisper of  

Thumbs up, no fear, smile and no tears

Get up, stand strong, and communicate

Knowledge attained, a world awaits,

Strength acquired, push.

And still the whisper of  

Thumbs up, no fear, smile and no tears

Love conveyed.

A father’s heart and his embrace,

Structure awaited.

With pomp and circumstance

Elation’s manifestation…

My turn to whisper

Thumbs up, no fear, smile and no tears

Comments

SilentMaiden95

Well written, I love the wording of it. It spoke to me.

nnw21

Awesomely expressed. Really!

Dpsc95

wow I really like it a lot!

zakrie

Very Nice. 

Stephanie D.

Nice.

RAINBOWPASSION17

i love the tone setting of your poem

stephaniealexsandracardenas@hotmail.com

I love how it truely tells a story. 

cjs03

Amazing Poem, well written

Khalissa_ismyname

well done :)

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