the wieght

Mon, 09/29/2014 - 13:16 -- jnino97

The wieght of life is bearable, only if you get ahead of it. The wieght of trying to make it somewhere in life is one of the greatest task you will ever face in your life, that doesn't mean you should let it pull you down, if you pull yourself up and pick those heavy wieghts resting on your shoulder you will get more momentom and strength from something that almost knocked you down, dont give up, persevere , stay properly motivated and keep your sight focused on your vison not whats in front you.

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