You Still Shout

"Mother,Father

Are you happy now?

I tried my hardest

But you still shout

Brother, Sister

Don't you see?

The locked doors

How I hid the key

Leader, teacher

How did you miss?

The marks and scars 

Across my wrists."

This poem is about: 
Our world

Comments

TamingOfSeaWolves

please tell me how to improve~seawolf

TamingOfSeaWolves

cast away what once was ours, because honestly all the world loves:

IS OUR EMPTY SHELLS

Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.
 

 

If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741