Poems from AcidicVomit

Hello! My names Rico! I'm trying to become more involved with poetry and it's community! I hope you enjoy my poems that I post here. I'm always open for criticisms, if you find something wrong please tell me! Thank you! And I hope you have a good day/week/month/year!
My mother takes the children out to play. With their jackets zipped up And their shoes tied tight, They run into the field of grass, While...