Poems from brookesteen13

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Hello! I'm a beginner poet trying to improve. I would love some constructive criticism so that I can develop some skills. I tend to write what I feel
My frame was out of focus  Cause I didn’t even notice  The high waters surrounding  And I was so close to drowning  Stuck inside this tub...
They say it’s not that hard you can change But they don’t know it’s an imbalance in her brain Regardless of what she does or what she will...
They say if you love me let me go But I say if you love me you’ll know That when I tell you to leave All I really mean Is you’re all I...
Underneath that smile Is a frown that’s hiding Underneath that sleeve  Are scares But you better not peek Underneath all that makeup Are...
You saw my destruction and called me a creation You noticed my frail roots and gave me a foundation You took my absence and gave me a will...

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