Poems from brookesteen13
Hello! I'm a beginner poet trying to improve. I would love some constructive criticism so that I can develop some skills. I tend to write what I feel
My frame was out of focus
Cause I didn’t even notice
The high waters surrounding
And I was so close to drowning
Stuck inside this tub...
They say it’s not that hard you can change
But they don’t know it’s an imbalance in her brain
Regardless of what she does or what she will...
They say if you love me let me go
But I say if you love me you’ll know
That when I tell you to leave
All I really mean
Is you’re all I...
Underneath that smile
Is a frown that’s hiding
Underneath that sleeve
Are scares
But you better not peek
Underneath all that makeup
Are...
You saw my destruction and called me a creation
You noticed my frail roots and gave me a foundation
You took my absence and gave me a will...