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18 love


18 love (Midnight love)(tennis reference))

By natal 
 
Her hair lines the night time sky her eyes in mine they twinkle they shine like the diamonds that hang over head in the night time sky...
Dam...
Nigh time love night time shines bright tonight full moon light my path as in her I try to find the light...
Damm...
Its nice out playing far field catch 500 in this open field...
Too many strong metaphors time to dumb it down since knowledge isn't in this field...
I try to hold back my feelings laying side by side displaying our feelings...
Time is tieing up my heart and healing my wounds from past love experiences...
Okay I'm all in allow me to be all out...
Play your notes of choice on my hearts strings...
Just don't wear me out...
Dry me out like a drought...
Empty my cold heart and let it utter not a peep...
Dam...
I like the way you move won't you do that dance for me...
Hop upon my back and let me carry you across this field of life...
400 yard gain....
Let me feel your love convey upon me your pain...
This way your love I can obtain...
Let all this shit around us just be mundane...
Either way when I'm with you all else drops off the face of this earth...
Let me touch you to see if this is real...
Allow me to hold you so that in you I can feel...
Let us make love...
Fuck fucking...
Let me  show you wat real sex is like...
You say it's too much too handle allow me to give you a pillow to bite...
It'll be worth your time...
Hu...
You can ride this bike no handle....
Shit I can't handle...
This boner swelling while next to you I'm sweating...
Personalities in my mind are telling me to make a move but I don't rush for I know it's too soon...
Dam...
My mind is swelling like a well is it well is it swell...
Hu I make you laugh well laughters always good...
I want to treat you like a well kept car but for once let me under the hood...
Stop the teasing this shit isn't good...
On the backs of our life's we lay...
You found the big dipper well in thee big allow me to lay...
 
Let this be our midnight love and in this midnight time under this midnight sky allow us to lay...
Our loves in the ocean it's shifting away please don't allow me to turn up astray...
Don't make me play for your love my girl...
This isn't tennis I can't stand to squash you or to forget about you...
Where 18 to love my dove I've tried 18 times for your love but I retuned for zero...
Shit I'm no hero...
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Nate the Great

this is my life I have a few accounts on here due to my short memory and crowded mind.

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