1st Commandment Blues

October 9, 2022

Can God pass judgment

against himself

Jesus, Buddha, Mohammed

their essence the same

Faith in the vision, truth at the core

a Trinity expanded

Tomato, tomatto, all roads lead to Rome

—His joy forever proclaimed

(Dreamsleep: October, 2022)

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