The 1st glance of souls intertwined
Being in your presence feels like peace.
Being able to have no thoughts only feeling pure appreciation for the emotion& physical of that present moment.
Looking into your eyes give me hope
Hearing your soothing voice wash over me
Thinking about you makes my heart excited
And sometimes, my thoughts have no filter as I feel simultaneously smart& so dumb at the same time.
No matter the plethora of emotions and physical reactions,
I know the universe is pulling us together because it always feels perfectly right.
I see a glimpse of a version of myself,
how I use to always choose the most fun& exciting options in life just for experience.
This reminds me of my outgoing self. Then I think of my higher self,
who’s already excited to see you for who your soul is& knows it’s going to be great.
I do not need a set timeline, I do not need the set plans,
I am asking of no requirements but all I need is,
to know that what we have,
will continue to slowly be built together.
Every other aspect can fall into place, as we make decisions together& plan accordingly.
Any plan will be perfect as long as it’s with you.
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Deeply personal love/attraction with minimal abstract philosophizing.
Multiple emotional observations and reflections densely packed throughout.
Overwhelmingly positive, celebratory tone about presence and connection.
Steady, contemplative intensity with moments of excitement and emotional rush.
Approximately 24-26 lines of varying visual length.
Some similes and personification; mostly direct emotional statement.
Pure lyric internal voice; intimate first-person reflection on feelings.
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