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July 27, 2012

I wanna be the one to take your breath away, the one to hear you say, "I do", I love you, I do, & to be the one who comforts you, when no one else comes through, well that's just another reason, that I wanna end up with you.

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jwienerAug 11, 2012

This is a beautiful poem, and even though it is just one sentence, the words are filled with true emotion and pure feeling.

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