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2.0 Madelyn (my most popular poem)


Oh, Madelyn you can bully my mom and tear me apart. You'll always lie about our friendship to try to make you seem kind. I can't believe who you've become. You used to be the one I always ran to or even called when I had no one at all. I'm glad we were close but not close enough that you just left without any remorse or regret at all. I wish I could hug you again and pat you on the head. I wonder if you'd want me to that again. You say "We'll be friends again over the summer" but nothing has changed is that what you always say? I remember our time in gym making all bad moments disappear and how you made my heart glow in the dark. Now you make my heart feel dark it feels alone without anyone to hold.
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This Poem's Voice

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Deeply personal betrayal and lost friendship; autobiographical rather than abstract

SparseMeasureDense

Moderate pacing; 2-3 distinct ideas per 10 lines with varied complexity

DarkSentimentBright

Strongly negative; grief, betrayal, loneliness dominate throughout

StillEnergyExplosive

Quiet, introspective voice; minimal explosive language; meditative hurt

MicroLengthEpic

10 lines; falls within 16-30 range scoring tier (5-6); actually 10 lines scores 5

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Some figurative language: heart glowing/dark metaphors, personification; mostly direct

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric internal voice; speaker's thoughts and memories; minimal dramatic distance

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